"This crucible leaks something horrible," the first magician said, poking into the carved stone bowl on the table. "What are we supposed to do?"
Two others stood beside him.
"We aren't supposed to do anything," said one. "It's what are we going to do?"
"Dunno," said the first. "We can't do bloody anything with this piece of shit."
"Sssshhhh!" said the other. "You'll offend it."
"Offend it? How can you offend a piece of stone?"
"Everyone knows crucibles have inner lives. You need their cooperation," said the other, a smart woman and the best witch of the age.
"Well, this one's been cooperationed out," said the magician. His black hair fell over his eyes and he shook it out. He put his wand back in his pocket.
"We'll get another," said the third one, a young man with shocking red hair. "Here." He pointed to the dusty shelves behind him against the wall. "Bound to be another one."
The magician sighed. "We need this one! Or weren't you paying attention?"
The woman sighed. "Yes, we were all paying attention, but you can hardly get the cooperation of a broken crucible."
"We're meant to use this one! It's in the prophecy. It's in the book. It's the one made for the job." The magician practically screamed. He'd had a very long day and he was wet from the storm.
"Well," the woman sniffed. "Obviously the prophecy has got it wrong."
"The prophecy can't get it wrong."
"Yes. Yes it can. It's only written by a man." The woman gave the magician a dangerous look.
"And passed down by many others," said the young red head. He stood between them holding a granite crucible and pestle. "I found these ... over there." He pointed a dank corner of the shelves. They were covered in dust balls held in place by thick cobwebs.
"You could have cleaned it first," said the woman.
"Thought we were in a hurry," said the boy.
"And how do you expect us to mix anything in a crucible filled with dirt?" She sneered at him and pulled the crucible from his grasp.
"Ow!" he said.
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Wednesday, April 11, 2012
Interesting Beginnings: Jaia
In the spring, for reasons unknown, I get a medieval thing in my head. It never lasts long enough for me to make anything of it. This story may have been the seed for my third novel, "From the Isles of Orion," which takes place in a future dystopian medieval world. As in, the world devolves into the medieval age after a major war or some kind of catastrophe. (That part is pretty vague.)
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The family shield showed an eagle, the eagle of protection. The old "eagle eye" or perhaps it was a hawk. She should really study up on her birds. She knew, anyway, that there was something noble about the emblem and it meant that she had inherited the paternalistic job of caring for the local community. This was a symbiotic relationship as the estate was supported by the income from the community. The baron/prince/sire protected in return for offerings. One of their landowners had done quite well, practically propping up the fiefdom/barony all by himself. Jaia knew this was bad. Having one support put them at risk. However, all by himself, the Laird of Loch Lynch provided half of their income. The rest came from small holders, a few merchants, and the monastery. Yes the monastery. They made a casked brandy and a goat cheese favored by the free worlds.
Yes, worlds. This was perhaps the biggest secret of leadership. While the general population thrived in ignorance, Jaia, as heir, knew about those from other worlds, other galaxies, who traded with them. On some worlds farming was no longer viable for those who had either destroyed their ground/earth or had covered it over with endless structures. Either way, it was an advantage for them.
Jaia was adept at covering over her knowledge. She had grown up with the dualistic life, ever remembering to change her stance and language for the locals and then back again when in the privacy of her home.
She lived with only a father. Her mother having died of some local fungus for which there was no known cure at this time and place. That was the official story. Unofficially, her mother now lived a disease free life on another planet. They spoke from time to time. Her mother was happy. Jaia missed her a lot.
At 16 Jaia was expected to become engaged; had actually left it a bit late, according to local custom. She stood beside the window, holding an embroidery project and sighed. She itched. Under her clothing something had bit her. She sighed again. A pox on this ancient garb! Lucky Mum dressed in something bacteria and disease resistant on a clean planet. Jaia thought about cursing her life and then stopped. It was not wise to spread that sort of energy. She crossed herself and silently appealed for grace. She sighed again.
The door flew open. Standing in the doorway was her lady-in-waiting, Trista.
"What ho, Trista?" asked Jaia calmly.
"My lady! He has arrived!" Trista's eyes were wide. She gasped audibly.
She's been at the dried cherries again, Jaia thought. "Who's arrived?"
"You're intended!"
"I have an intended?"
"You jest! Let not the Lord Darca hear you!"
"He shan't hear me if you do your job and keep him from my private chambers."
Trista quickly closed the door behind her and came up to her, putting her face so close to hers she could see the blackheads on her nose.
"My lady, I am as silent as the night."
"Without owls, I presume?"
"You must attend. The Lord Darca is here and he will wish to see you."
"I believe I can countenance that wish."
"Come! I will help you prepare."
"Prepare? Is he so dangerous?"
"You can't be presented to him in your common dress."
"Why not? He will become accustomed to it soon enough if we wed."
"If? How can you not accept him? If you wait much longer you will acquire the status of dowager and then none will have you."
"Trista, you may be astounded to learn that I am not interested in being had."
Trista stood shocked into silence.
Jaia sighed. "But if it will bring you happiness, let us prepare for this unknown lord."
"Thank you, miss. Else I would have had to send a disappointing message to your father."
"Oh? And would he dress me?"
Trista relapsed into her shocked pose.
"Never mind. Let's be dressing, shall we?"
As she dressed, Jaia thought about the hounds and her hunting horse. She'd much rather be racing through the countryside. She didn't particularly care for fox hunting. It merely gave her an excuse to pursue an normally unladylike penchant for galloping through the landscape. A good run would relax her. But then Lord Darca would have to wait and that was unacceptable.
She wished her father had remembered to alert her to this new suitor. Perhaps he had grown tired of her exacting standards. Perhaps there was some reason she needed to be betrothed right now. Perhaps ... well, useless to speculate. Best to get dressed and get it over with so she could be enlightened as to her father's purpose.
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The family shield showed an eagle, the eagle of protection. The old "eagle eye" or perhaps it was a hawk. She should really study up on her birds. She knew, anyway, that there was something noble about the emblem and it meant that she had inherited the paternalistic job of caring for the local community. This was a symbiotic relationship as the estate was supported by the income from the community. The baron/prince/sire protected in return for offerings. One of their landowners had done quite well, practically propping up the fiefdom/barony all by himself. Jaia knew this was bad. Having one support put them at risk. However, all by himself, the Laird of Loch Lynch provided half of their income. The rest came from small holders, a few merchants, and the monastery. Yes the monastery. They made a casked brandy and a goat cheese favored by the free worlds.
Yes, worlds. This was perhaps the biggest secret of leadership. While the general population thrived in ignorance, Jaia, as heir, knew about those from other worlds, other galaxies, who traded with them. On some worlds farming was no longer viable for those who had either destroyed their ground/earth or had covered it over with endless structures. Either way, it was an advantage for them.
Jaia was adept at covering over her knowledge. She had grown up with the dualistic life, ever remembering to change her stance and language for the locals and then back again when in the privacy of her home.
She lived with only a father. Her mother having died of some local fungus for which there was no known cure at this time and place. That was the official story. Unofficially, her mother now lived a disease free life on another planet. They spoke from time to time. Her mother was happy. Jaia missed her a lot.
At 16 Jaia was expected to become engaged; had actually left it a bit late, according to local custom. She stood beside the window, holding an embroidery project and sighed. She itched. Under her clothing something had bit her. She sighed again. A pox on this ancient garb! Lucky Mum dressed in something bacteria and disease resistant on a clean planet. Jaia thought about cursing her life and then stopped. It was not wise to spread that sort of energy. She crossed herself and silently appealed for grace. She sighed again.
The door flew open. Standing in the doorway was her lady-in-waiting, Trista.
"What ho, Trista?" asked Jaia calmly.
"My lady! He has arrived!" Trista's eyes were wide. She gasped audibly.
She's been at the dried cherries again, Jaia thought. "Who's arrived?"
"You're intended!"
"I have an intended?"
"You jest! Let not the Lord Darca hear you!"
"He shan't hear me if you do your job and keep him from my private chambers."
Trista quickly closed the door behind her and came up to her, putting her face so close to hers she could see the blackheads on her nose.
"My lady, I am as silent as the night."
"Without owls, I presume?"
"You must attend. The Lord Darca is here and he will wish to see you."
"I believe I can countenance that wish."
"Come! I will help you prepare."
"Prepare? Is he so dangerous?"
"You can't be presented to him in your common dress."
"Why not? He will become accustomed to it soon enough if we wed."
"If? How can you not accept him? If you wait much longer you will acquire the status of dowager and then none will have you."
"Trista, you may be astounded to learn that I am not interested in being had."
Trista stood shocked into silence.
Jaia sighed. "But if it will bring you happiness, let us prepare for this unknown lord."
"Thank you, miss. Else I would have had to send a disappointing message to your father."
"Oh? And would he dress me?"
Trista relapsed into her shocked pose.
"Never mind. Let's be dressing, shall we?"
As she dressed, Jaia thought about the hounds and her hunting horse. She'd much rather be racing through the countryside. She didn't particularly care for fox hunting. It merely gave her an excuse to pursue an normally unladylike penchant for galloping through the landscape. A good run would relax her. But then Lord Darca would have to wait and that was unacceptable.
She wished her father had remembered to alert her to this new suitor. Perhaps he had grown tired of her exacting standards. Perhaps there was some reason she needed to be betrothed right now. Perhaps ... well, useless to speculate. Best to get dressed and get it over with so she could be enlightened as to her father's purpose.
Wednesday, April 4, 2012
Interesting Beginnings: Old Man with Forked Stick
I don't know where this came from. I got in a mood one day and this beginning unrolled itself like a movie in my mind. I tried to come up with time references that didn't include a clock. I've decided since that the normal ways to address time are the best – they're less distracting.
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The old man hung on his staff, leaning painfully against the forked top. The forked top had once been the point of focus for his magic, now it was simply a convenient holder for his armpit so he could walk on his own. His sister had attempted repeatedly to have him move in with her, but he refused. He knew that was the way to losing his independence, and he needed it badly. Very badly. He was old and fading but he still had much to do. And much he could do. He hadn't had an apprentice in half an age. Perhaps word was getting around or had got around about his lack of attentiveness. No matter.
As he walked along the woodland path he reviewed the eager apprentices who had spent their years in service, learning the way of the mage. He could also lead them along the shamanic path. Only one apprentice had chosen that path. It was longer and more arduous and she had been eager and full of ideas and energy. She hadn't made it, but then that was the point of the shaman's path. To weed out those who were unsuited. He blinked back a few tears, remembering his own shamanic journey. He had squeaked by, he felt, with a lot of luck and the advice of, surprisingly, an old widow in a small village.
As the sun set, the noises in the woods surrounding him changed. He paused and looked up at the torn segment of sky he could see between the tree tops. Soon the leaves would be changing. Already there was a mild scent of rot from the undergrowth. No clouds. Moisture was collecting in the air and on the ground.
He sighed, wiped his eyes. Not seeing as good as he used to. Still able to read the book, though. Smiling vaguely at something that flickered in his mind, he straightened and pressed forward again clinging to his stick.
As he walked along, hobbling every so often and pausing to rest, other memories came and went, flitting through the vastness of his mind like the birds under the canopy.
Dark had arisen by the time he reached his sister's door. He knocked politely, and then waited, adjusting his hat so that it perched once again straight upon his head.
The door opened.
"Wenzel!" his sister said as she wiped her hands on a cloth. Still clutching the rag in one hand she embraced him firmly. "Come in! come in!" she stood sideways and waited for him to pass. “You’re just in time for supper," she said as she closed the door behind them.
"Here, let me take that stick."
Wenzel stopped walking. "It's not a stick. It's my staff."
"Stick, staff, whatever."
"Well, I can't give it to you. It's holding me up at the moment."
"Wenzel! Have you walked all this way?"
Wenzel said nothing, continuing to make his way toward the kitchen and a bench in front of table he rightfully knew would soon be groaning with food. His sister followed him along the darkened passage.
"You have, haven't you?"
Wenzel sat with an expulsion of air that morphed into a relieved sigh. "Ahhhhh," he breathed. The staff he still held in his hands. He took in a deep breath full of yeasty and beefy fumes.
"Here, give me that," said his sister take the staff.
"Careful!" he said raising his hands up in a cautionary gesture. "You don't know what you've got there. Place it some place out of the way. I don't want Ned falling over it again."
"No worries about Ned," the sister said, thinking about her husband. "He's got eyes twice as good as yours."
Wenzel muttered something inaudible which sounded like something between indignation and resignation. "Oofff!"he said in the next minute. "Arrgg, my feet."
"Serve you right," said his sister returning to the kitchen. "You shouldn't have walked. You should have sent for us to fetch you."
"And waited for weeks? No. Not when I can get here in under a day."
Priscilla, his sister, turned and looked hard at him. "Under a day. A walk that should be but a few inches of movement of shadow on a wall." Her face dissolved into concern and something that might have presaged tears in another woman, and then, abruptly, became hard.
"That's it. I'm not asking anymore. I'm telling. You're moving in with us." With a flounce she returned to the fire and the pots.
Wenzel sighed very deeply. "Can I get a mug of water?" he asked meekly.
It was fully dark when the threesome, Wenzel, Priscilla and Ned, finished the evening meal.
"Come along," said Ned. "Let's into something comfortable and have that mug of ale."
"Aye," agreed Wenzel.
Priscilla jumped up quickly and disappeared out the door, returning moments later with the staff. "Here you are, grandfather," she said gently.
Wenzel snatched the staff. "I'm no one's grandfather!"
"Well, you look like one." Her gaze softened. "Go on, have your drink and sit in front of the fire. The nights are drawing in and we have a bit of warming before we go to bed."
Wenzel groaned his way to his feet and plodded out the door into the passageway. He came upon Ned already seated in a rough, sturdy chair and the fire crackling as it fed on the dry sticks. Wenzel sank down gratefully in the companion chair, waiting for him. Ned jumped up and reached to the hearth to grab the ale mug warming there.
"Here you are," he said presenting Wenzel with the ale. Then he poked the fire a bit . He added a few medium logs from the hopper and sat down again.
"Going to be a bad fall, I fear. Too wet. Too much rain," Ned said.
"That shouldn't trouble you. You've got cows and goats."
"It will affect the trading and we're close to the bone as it is. Haven't recovered from the harsh winter. Lost three animals in that one."
"A three animal winter," said Wenzel almost to himself. Yes, he thought. Bad. However, he continued philosophically, it's been worse. "You'll recover," he said to Ned in a raised, firm tone. "The autumn will be long and you'll find the fields will give a extra spurt of yield before the winter closes in."
"How do you know these things?"
"Ah ha ha," said Wenzel mildly, "when you choose the path of magic I'll explain it to you." They both laughed at that and sipped their ale. They had been sitting in companionable silence and the fire had burned low when Priscilla looked in.
"I've warmed your bed," she said to Wenzel. "You can go up anytime." She paused. "Provided, of course, that you can get up the ladder."
"Oh yes, still do that. Lots of ladders at my place."
Priscilla sat on the simple, lighter chair that remained. "Perhaps we should add on a sleeping area down here." Priscilla looked at Ned. He pulled the pipe out of his mouth and blew gazing thoughtfully at the fire.
"Yes, we can do that. We've still time before the true winter closes in."
"Oh, no, no," Wenzel protested. "Don't go to any trouble for me. I'm not staying that long."
"Yes, you are and that's an end to it," said Priscilla firmly with a look in her eyes that softened the tone.
"Then you'll need to build more than a sleep area. I need room for my scrolls, books, implements and animals." Wenzel smiled to himself knowing this would be a difficult request. "Wait until next summer. I can get through one more winter on my own."
"You've been saying that for many slantings of the sun. No more. You're not safe there anymore. You won't be able to take care of your place when the winter hits. You can't make the repairs anymore and Ned and I can't be running over every day to check on you. What if something happens in the night?"
"Then it was meant to be. What is, is."
Priscilla stared into the fire, carefully keeping her face turned. A hand went up to her eyes. "No, Wenzel," she said more softly. "I can't leave you alone for one more winter. I could never forgive myself if something happened to you that could have been prevented by you living within these walls."
Wenzel said nothing. Ned rose and tapped his pipe out into the hearth. He kicked the remaining embers which had burned low. Sparks flew as he pushed the remaining hot pieces together with his hobnail boots. He stretched and made a deep noise in his chest. He yawned.
"Gotta get some sleep. I'll see you in bed, Prissy," he said. He turned and left the room. Priscilla and Wenzel rose together, Wenzel leaning on his staff. Priscilla took a last look at the fire, ascertaining that the embers were too low to cause any trouble in the night. Then she put her arm lightly around her brother's shoulders.
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The old man hung on his staff, leaning painfully against the forked top. The forked top had once been the point of focus for his magic, now it was simply a convenient holder for his armpit so he could walk on his own. His sister had attempted repeatedly to have him move in with her, but he refused. He knew that was the way to losing his independence, and he needed it badly. Very badly. He was old and fading but he still had much to do. And much he could do. He hadn't had an apprentice in half an age. Perhaps word was getting around or had got around about his lack of attentiveness. No matter.
As he walked along the woodland path he reviewed the eager apprentices who had spent their years in service, learning the way of the mage. He could also lead them along the shamanic path. Only one apprentice had chosen that path. It was longer and more arduous and she had been eager and full of ideas and energy. She hadn't made it, but then that was the point of the shaman's path. To weed out those who were unsuited. He blinked back a few tears, remembering his own shamanic journey. He had squeaked by, he felt, with a lot of luck and the advice of, surprisingly, an old widow in a small village.
As the sun set, the noises in the woods surrounding him changed. He paused and looked up at the torn segment of sky he could see between the tree tops. Soon the leaves would be changing. Already there was a mild scent of rot from the undergrowth. No clouds. Moisture was collecting in the air and on the ground.
He sighed, wiped his eyes. Not seeing as good as he used to. Still able to read the book, though. Smiling vaguely at something that flickered in his mind, he straightened and pressed forward again clinging to his stick.
As he walked along, hobbling every so often and pausing to rest, other memories came and went, flitting through the vastness of his mind like the birds under the canopy.
Dark had arisen by the time he reached his sister's door. He knocked politely, and then waited, adjusting his hat so that it perched once again straight upon his head.
The door opened.
"Wenzel!" his sister said as she wiped her hands on a cloth. Still clutching the rag in one hand she embraced him firmly. "Come in! come in!" she stood sideways and waited for him to pass. “You’re just in time for supper," she said as she closed the door behind them.
"Here, let me take that stick."
Wenzel stopped walking. "It's not a stick. It's my staff."
"Stick, staff, whatever."
"Well, I can't give it to you. It's holding me up at the moment."
"Wenzel! Have you walked all this way?"
Wenzel said nothing, continuing to make his way toward the kitchen and a bench in front of table he rightfully knew would soon be groaning with food. His sister followed him along the darkened passage.
"You have, haven't you?"
Wenzel sat with an expulsion of air that morphed into a relieved sigh. "Ahhhhh," he breathed. The staff he still held in his hands. He took in a deep breath full of yeasty and beefy fumes.
"Here, give me that," said his sister take the staff.
"Careful!" he said raising his hands up in a cautionary gesture. "You don't know what you've got there. Place it some place out of the way. I don't want Ned falling over it again."
"No worries about Ned," the sister said, thinking about her husband. "He's got eyes twice as good as yours."
Wenzel muttered something inaudible which sounded like something between indignation and resignation. "Oofff!"he said in the next minute. "Arrgg, my feet."
"Serve you right," said his sister returning to the kitchen. "You shouldn't have walked. You should have sent for us to fetch you."
"And waited for weeks? No. Not when I can get here in under a day."
Priscilla, his sister, turned and looked hard at him. "Under a day. A walk that should be but a few inches of movement of shadow on a wall." Her face dissolved into concern and something that might have presaged tears in another woman, and then, abruptly, became hard.
"That's it. I'm not asking anymore. I'm telling. You're moving in with us." With a flounce she returned to the fire and the pots.
Wenzel sighed very deeply. "Can I get a mug of water?" he asked meekly.
It was fully dark when the threesome, Wenzel, Priscilla and Ned, finished the evening meal.
"Come along," said Ned. "Let's into something comfortable and have that mug of ale."
"Aye," agreed Wenzel.
Priscilla jumped up quickly and disappeared out the door, returning moments later with the staff. "Here you are, grandfather," she said gently.
Wenzel snatched the staff. "I'm no one's grandfather!"
"Well, you look like one." Her gaze softened. "Go on, have your drink and sit in front of the fire. The nights are drawing in and we have a bit of warming before we go to bed."
Wenzel groaned his way to his feet and plodded out the door into the passageway. He came upon Ned already seated in a rough, sturdy chair and the fire crackling as it fed on the dry sticks. Wenzel sank down gratefully in the companion chair, waiting for him. Ned jumped up and reached to the hearth to grab the ale mug warming there.
"Here you are," he said presenting Wenzel with the ale. Then he poked the fire a bit . He added a few medium logs from the hopper and sat down again.
"Going to be a bad fall, I fear. Too wet. Too much rain," Ned said.
"That shouldn't trouble you. You've got cows and goats."
"It will affect the trading and we're close to the bone as it is. Haven't recovered from the harsh winter. Lost three animals in that one."
"A three animal winter," said Wenzel almost to himself. Yes, he thought. Bad. However, he continued philosophically, it's been worse. "You'll recover," he said to Ned in a raised, firm tone. "The autumn will be long and you'll find the fields will give a extra spurt of yield before the winter closes in."
"How do you know these things?"
"Ah ha ha," said Wenzel mildly, "when you choose the path of magic I'll explain it to you." They both laughed at that and sipped their ale. They had been sitting in companionable silence and the fire had burned low when Priscilla looked in.
"I've warmed your bed," she said to Wenzel. "You can go up anytime." She paused. "Provided, of course, that you can get up the ladder."
"Oh yes, still do that. Lots of ladders at my place."
Priscilla sat on the simple, lighter chair that remained. "Perhaps we should add on a sleeping area down here." Priscilla looked at Ned. He pulled the pipe out of his mouth and blew gazing thoughtfully at the fire.
"Yes, we can do that. We've still time before the true winter closes in."
"Oh, no, no," Wenzel protested. "Don't go to any trouble for me. I'm not staying that long."
"Yes, you are and that's an end to it," said Priscilla firmly with a look in her eyes that softened the tone.
"Then you'll need to build more than a sleep area. I need room for my scrolls, books, implements and animals." Wenzel smiled to himself knowing this would be a difficult request. "Wait until next summer. I can get through one more winter on my own."
"You've been saying that for many slantings of the sun. No more. You're not safe there anymore. You won't be able to take care of your place when the winter hits. You can't make the repairs anymore and Ned and I can't be running over every day to check on you. What if something happens in the night?"
"Then it was meant to be. What is, is."
Priscilla stared into the fire, carefully keeping her face turned. A hand went up to her eyes. "No, Wenzel," she said more softly. "I can't leave you alone for one more winter. I could never forgive myself if something happened to you that could have been prevented by you living within these walls."
Wenzel said nothing. Ned rose and tapped his pipe out into the hearth. He kicked the remaining embers which had burned low. Sparks flew as he pushed the remaining hot pieces together with his hobnail boots. He stretched and made a deep noise in his chest. He yawned.
"Gotta get some sleep. I'll see you in bed, Prissy," he said. He turned and left the room. Priscilla and Wenzel rose together, Wenzel leaning on his staff. Priscilla took a last look at the fire, ascertaining that the embers were too low to cause any trouble in the night. Then she put her arm lightly around her brother's shoulders.
Wednesday, March 28, 2012
Interesting Beginnings: Peach
This is a bit of flash fiction I generated as a participant in a writer's group in Second Life. The word "peach" had to be included in the story.
She relaxed into her mind's eye and took another look. Yes. He was like most salesman, honest about what he told her and scrupulous about leaving out what might prevent her from buying. After all, he was trying to help her and he didn't want anything to get in the way.
She smiled back.
"Sorry, no," she said. "I don't really need one."
"Today?" he said.
"Ever. Undoubtedly." She added the last quickly to forestall further discussion.
"Can I buy you lunch?" he asked.
"Can you?" she said.
He laughed. "Well, of course. Would you allow me to treat you to lunch?"
There it was. That twinkle in his eye, that little light of merriment that said, We're all in this together why not enjoy it?
Why not indeed, she thought.
"No," she said. "I've got to get back."
He looked as if he was going to protest. She could almost hear him asking, "Back to what?" She was glad he didn't ask. She would not have been able to explain with anything like coherency.
"Okay, then," he said. He looked down at his feet. Then he looked up and raised his hand in salute. "Later!"
That was fast, she thought. But she merely turned, pulling her keys out of her pocket and heading for the parking lot. She meandered among the cars, finding her red Saturn after a couple of false positives. It needed a wash. The paint was scratched along the passenger side from too close a connection with shrubbery along the roadway. She sighed, turned the key, and got in.
The car moved easily along the roadway. She thought of him in a sort of abstract way, wondering what he really had on his mind. There was some darkness lurking just behind his face, moving along the surface of his skin. Some dark thing that he held back, as if it were so huge it would overwhelm her.
She got that a lot. Men often wanted to confide in her. Usually all she had to do was wait. But this time it wasn't working. This time she might have to work at it. To make him tell her, some how. This would be rough. He would go on trying to sell her and she would go on refusing, waiting for the time when he would finally open up and let her have it.
She hoped it wouldn't take too much longer and she hoped he told her the whole truth the first time instead of drawing it out over weeks. She hated the bits and pieces.
She pushed on the brake pedal. Her purse and packages slid to the front of the car, stopped by the passenger side foot rest. The car reared up a bit on it's front end and settled back down. She would have to start paying attention. Construction up ahead.
Forward motion stopped. The car ahead of hers was just as dirty as hers. She could see the silhouette of a head bobbing rhythmically.
What was it? Why didn't he just tell her and come out with it?
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
It was a peach of a deal. He winked at her. She saluted – with her mind. He had a good rap. She could tell he was a helluva salesman, or thought he was anyway. She supposed that others had bought from him. It was likely. She wasn't buying anything.She relaxed into her mind's eye and took another look. Yes. He was like most salesman, honest about what he told her and scrupulous about leaving out what might prevent her from buying. After all, he was trying to help her and he didn't want anything to get in the way.
She smiled back.
"Sorry, no," she said. "I don't really need one."
"Today?" he said.
"Ever. Undoubtedly." She added the last quickly to forestall further discussion.
"Can I buy you lunch?" he asked.
"Can you?" she said.
He laughed. "Well, of course. Would you allow me to treat you to lunch?"
There it was. That twinkle in his eye, that little light of merriment that said, We're all in this together why not enjoy it?
Why not indeed, she thought.
"No," she said. "I've got to get back."
He looked as if he was going to protest. She could almost hear him asking, "Back to what?" She was glad he didn't ask. She would not have been able to explain with anything like coherency.
"Okay, then," he said. He looked down at his feet. Then he looked up and raised his hand in salute. "Later!"
That was fast, she thought. But she merely turned, pulling her keys out of her pocket and heading for the parking lot. She meandered among the cars, finding her red Saturn after a couple of false positives. It needed a wash. The paint was scratched along the passenger side from too close a connection with shrubbery along the roadway. She sighed, turned the key, and got in.
The car moved easily along the roadway. She thought of him in a sort of abstract way, wondering what he really had on his mind. There was some darkness lurking just behind his face, moving along the surface of his skin. Some dark thing that he held back, as if it were so huge it would overwhelm her.
She got that a lot. Men often wanted to confide in her. Usually all she had to do was wait. But this time it wasn't working. This time she might have to work at it. To make him tell her, some how. This would be rough. He would go on trying to sell her and she would go on refusing, waiting for the time when he would finally open up and let her have it.
She hoped it wouldn't take too much longer and she hoped he told her the whole truth the first time instead of drawing it out over weeks. She hated the bits and pieces.
She pushed on the brake pedal. Her purse and packages slid to the front of the car, stopped by the passenger side foot rest. The car reared up a bit on it's front end and settled back down. She would have to start paying attention. Construction up ahead.
Forward motion stopped. The car ahead of hers was just as dirty as hers. She could see the silhouette of a head bobbing rhythmically.
What was it? Why didn't he just tell her and come out with it?
Wednesday, March 21, 2012
Interesting Beginnings: Shotgun
Welcome to "Interesting Beginnings"! These are, as you might suspect, the beginnings of ideas. I wrote them at odd moments with no goal in mind. Although I find them interesting, they haven't been interesting enough (yet) to get me to create whole stories from them.
They are rough and minimally edited for clarity. About once a week I'll post a new beginning. Hope you find them as interesting as I have.
Pod held the long gun up at the ready, sitting astride his framework on the roof as the car swung around the corner. He had a black sash around his forehead. His arms were brown and muscular; scarred, partially covered by rags and tokens and bandages. But he was clean. One of the first rules. Preserve your health by staying clean. Important in a job that required top health.
Shotgun was a young man's job. Some old men were Shotguns; a few—the hardy, the uncommonly physically gifted. Those with the physiology for it.
Pod knew his job was precarious. Knew he might die before he retired or got promoted. Didn't care. He was feeding his sister and her brood as well as his tired old mother. They depended on him. And he was avenging his father's death. Not to mention his brother who had been slain by the Shotgun of a rival gang.
And Pod had plans for the future. Plans to settle down and hire a Shotgun of his own one day. Pod wanted to be a gang boss.
Letitia had no such plans. Letitia was a librarian, for such libraries as still existed, and prided herself on her ability to find any scrap of information or data needed. She wore glasses, a pair she had recovered from a tip that seemed to be just right.
She sat in the old, ancient room with dusty shelves surrounding her. A bit of light entered through the long tall window. The panes were filthy and full of cobwebs.
They are rough and minimally edited for clarity. About once a week I'll post a new beginning. Hope you find them as interesting as I have.
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Pod rode shotgun. He was young. But then they usually were young. You had to have good eyesight, quick reflexes, and lot of energy for the job.Pod held the long gun up at the ready, sitting astride his framework on the roof as the car swung around the corner. He had a black sash around his forehead. His arms were brown and muscular; scarred, partially covered by rags and tokens and bandages. But he was clean. One of the first rules. Preserve your health by staying clean. Important in a job that required top health.
Shotgun was a young man's job. Some old men were Shotguns; a few—the hardy, the uncommonly physically gifted. Those with the physiology for it.
Pod knew his job was precarious. Knew he might die before he retired or got promoted. Didn't care. He was feeding his sister and her brood as well as his tired old mother. They depended on him. And he was avenging his father's death. Not to mention his brother who had been slain by the Shotgun of a rival gang.
And Pod had plans for the future. Plans to settle down and hire a Shotgun of his own one day. Pod wanted to be a gang boss.
Letitia had no such plans. Letitia was a librarian, for such libraries as still existed, and prided herself on her ability to find any scrap of information or data needed. She wore glasses, a pair she had recovered from a tip that seemed to be just right.
She sat in the old, ancient room with dusty shelves surrounding her. A bit of light entered through the long tall window. The panes were filthy and full of cobwebs.
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